Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, adolescents need community resources in their spare time. But the question here is: is it good if teenagers are expected to do unpaid community work in their free time? Some people argue that young people should be expected to do voluntary community service in their spare time. I agree with the examples in this essay to support my opinion.
First of all, they will be very supportive as adolescents provide community services to disadvantaged people. And after supporting them, they'll feel very good. Why are they satisfied with that? And if you do something for someone else, or you can support them, they're going to feel happy, of course. For example, if you distribute charity rice to poor people, they will have food to eat. And then you're done, and they're going to be very happy.
Many young people operate on a voluntary basis, and this can only benefit both the person and the community as a whole. Most young people are still under ample pressure with their studies, so I think they can do something to relieve study stress for community service, and also learn more about the real world, the poor people to support them. A lot of teenagers, for example, study very well and have a lot of stress in their studies, but they don't know much about the bad, about real life. And that's why, in their spare time, teenagers should be expected to do voluntary community service.
After discussing this in detail, though I agree that unpaid social services can be beneficial to both youth and the community, I would suggest it should not be made compulsory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, then, well, for example, i think, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75457875458 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39618122123 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527472527473 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 0.809619238477 1235% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5889790888 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403502685434 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134928998008 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119561514636 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244046348417 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133800088912 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.