Nowadays, children are pressurized with academic, social and commercial aspects. It can be also seen that this academic, social and commercial pressures are more and more challenging for children. We need to juxtapose all the causes and solutions, and then conduct an analysis for the same so that we can frame a quintessential and extrapolation verdict.
To begin with, there are many causes which led to the genesis of this problem. Firstly, there are many academic pressure on child. Today child are not competing with their next door child but also with global village. They feels pressure from schools, teachers and also from parents. Parents send their child to best schools where they feel burden of study as their school bags are even heavy more than themselves. they do not have time to bring out their hidden talent.
Then there are also social and commercial pressure on children. socially, Today child want to embrace modern ideas and culture whereas their parents wants them to adopt traditional. Sometimes that becoming stressful for children to argue with their parents. And then also some peer pressure, it may good or bad depends on their peers. Good peers leaves good impact on child and bad ones drag them towards bad habits also. When children see smart phones and other gadgets with their peers they also want that. And if it is not available to them they feels frustrated and may depressed.
There is no any particular solution. Parents have to care their child with more disciplined and soften ways. parents should have realistic expectations from their child. Teachers also have to bring out best from children in every field. They should not pressurized children to win at any cost but encourage them to do all things which help them to get best future.
post expounding on all the causes and solution without any degree of doubt it can be deducted that if above solutions are followed properly it will be a source of positive outcome and it would ameliorate status of things in plethora of ways.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...hild but also with global village. They feels pressure from schools, teachers and als...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...gs are even heavy more than themselves. they do not have time to bring out their hid...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...time to bring out their hidden talent. Then there are also social and commercia...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Socially
...al and commercial pressure on children. socially, Today child want to embrace modern ide...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...d bad ones drag them towards bad habits also. When children see smart phones and oth...
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Line 5, column 550, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...And if it is not available to them they feels frustrated and may depressed. There...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...strated and may depressed. There is no any particular solution. Parents have t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parents
... with more disciplined and soften ways. parents should have realistic expectations from...
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Line 7, column 254, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'pressurize'
Suggestion: pressurize
...hildren in every field. They should not pressurized children to win at any cost but encoura...
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Line 7, column 349, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'get the best'.
Suggestion: get the best
...hem to do all things which help them to get best future. post expounding on all the c...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Post
... which help them to get best future. post expounding on all the causes and soluti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44508092108 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520467836257 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3759273605 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208324285967 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796439676818 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101231536441 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1274863774 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747053042864 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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