It is common nowadays for people to look up to science, technology and business instead of art. I agree with the view that art is a crucial part of all cultures and we have to notice more about it.
On the one hand, art contributes a big impact for mental health progress, particularly for those who have mental illness. In the near decades, people have been struggling with stress day by day in work and casual life a lot. Some of us could not confront the severe condition in life and chose the dead to be rid of their black. Besides, instead of the dead or extreme action, plenteous people chose art for relaxing such as drawing or taking photos because art is an opportunity to capture, document and remember the happy times and the things in life that naturally tend to relax you and expose yourself in each artistic product you make. In other words, you can get into numerous happy things and release your feelings into each work.
On the second hand, it is not only helping people to improve mental health or hobbies, art also helps you make money on it. Besides jobs related to science, technology and business, there are numberless jobs with a high salary range for people who have hobbies in art such as fashion design, photographer and so on which get abundant money. In this age, the need for clothes, shooting a picture of products or people and art-related works are needed in casual life and many companies and individuals seek people to be a part of their companies.
Overall, art plays a crucial role in people's lives and helps people live positively through the day. It is not just considered a hobby now, it is also a job making living in our life.
- Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world However these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science technology and business Why do you think that is What could be done to encourage more pe 73
- Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 87
- For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world However nowadays people s values have changed and we tend to consider science technology and business more important than arts What do you think are the causes of this 87
- Environmental problems such as pollution and aimatic variations are increasing nowadays The government have taken some measures at a global level But they got only few solutions Why is it so How can this problem be solved 56
- Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world However these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science technology and business Why do you think that is What could be done to encourage more pe 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, second, so, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55149501661 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39111739828 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3540064101 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222405153842 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851679913491 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426126998394 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146732835419 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404475039193 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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