Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Others believe that there
are health benefits of living in the cities. Discuss both views and give your own opinions
For some individuals, rural areas are considered to be the idea
environment to help people gain a healthier lifestyle. Nonetheless,
others assume that there are also many health advantages in the
cities. In my perspective, I suppose that it would be easier for
those people living in the countryside to stay healthy
On the one hand, big cities nowaday provide an enormous
facilities that could be useful to help people keep in shape.
Specifically, there are a host of sport centers or gyms with
professional trainers that could help you to do some proper
workout. Consequently, you can improve your health as well as
strengthen your muscles. For example, a woman can loose
weight and has a nice body by following a specific course on the
internet
On the other hand, countryside may be the ultimate area for
improving health due to some beneficial conditions. Obviously,
the quality of water, air or food in the rural areas are higher and
the connection to the internet is lower than the other. As a result
this can be the main elements which affect positively to our
lifestyle.For instance, an individual who can not access to the
internet would have the tendency to go out or play sport.
Therefore, it is better to gain a healthy lifestyle in the countryside
To conclude, both areas possess their own strong aspects in
improving human’s health. In my own point of view, I believe that
countryside would be more beneficial to keep people in a good
health lifestyle
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'facility'?
Suggestion: facility
...big cities nowaday provide an enormous facilities that could be useful to help people kee...
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Line 8, column 27, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'hosts'?
Suggestion: hosts
...ep in shape. Specifically, there are a host of sport centers or gyms with professi...
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Line 11, column 51, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... your muscles. For example, a woman can loose weight and has a nice body by followin...
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Line 17, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o the internet is lower than the other. As a result this can be the main elements...
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Line 19, column 11, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...ich affect positively to our lifestyle.For instance, an individual who can not acc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i suppose, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01984126984 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85840745823 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579365079365 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.4766282551 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256058352725 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985943313167 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835765749276 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613601797471 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670594846421 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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