THE ONLY WAY TO REDUCE THE AMOUNT OF TRAFFIC IN CITIES TODAY IS BY REDUCING THE NEED FOR PEOPLE TO TRAVEL FROM HOME FOR WORK, EDUCATION OR SHOPPING.
If is often argued that, discouraging people for travelling for work, shopping or school and college is the best way to lessen the heavy traffic of city area. I completely disagree to this opinion and this essay will discuss about other important measures that can reduce traffic in city area.
To begin with, I believe that improvement of roadways is the major factor to decrease traffic problem in any area. If the roads are narrow and congested, then this led to the heavy traffic problems which also help to increase road accidents as well. Therefore, road expansion plays a vital role in reduction of traffic. For example, in developed countries we rarely hear news of traffic jam, but in under developed countries like Nepal, due to the afraid of heavy traffic, people in city area have to leave earlier for their work or education. Thus, to diminish the traffic problems, government and concern authorities should take effective step to improve roads conditions that can bear increasing numbers of private and public transportations.
On the other hand, encouraging public to use public transport and strict traffic rules can be another milestone to diminish traffic form cities. In others words, government should upgrade the quality of public vehicle so that people use it without hesitation and comfortably. Besides quality, concern authorities also focus on to reduce fees of public vehicles and should impose strict traffic rules for everyone to maintain the heavy traffic. For Instance, increasing number of small private cars and bikes are creating more traffic in cities. The recent survey had revealed that, people prefer private car to public because of their bad services. Thus, encouragement on mass transportation can be effective to reduce traffic.
In conclusion, in modern time people always want freedom on travelling, so government should focus on upgrade the highways and public transportation rather than reducing the need of people travelling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 465, Rule ID: AFRAID_OF_HEIGHT[2]
Message: The noun should be probably in the plural form: 'traffics'.
Suggestion: traffics
... like Nepal, due to the afraid of heavy traffic, people in city area have to leave earl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1670.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30158730159 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73785184103 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55873015873 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.704757086 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28631047492 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993476864785 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872065170205 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18741084573 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815395548979 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.