Modern technology is used in many workplaces today. how do you think technology changed the ways people work? Do you think there any disadvantages of relaying on technology at work?
Advancements in technology have altered the ways people live, work and relate to one another. it is beyond doubt that the trend has also changed the workplaces and how they engage in work. I believe that although modern technology makes the working environment more comfortable, it creates some unfavourable circumstances too.
Nowadays, a massive transformation has taken place in workplaces regardless of the field or industry. cloud computing, robotic process automation (RPA), internet of things (IoT) and mobility are some major areas that have contributed to this change. for instance, cloud computing is one of the key technology made industries kept up and running during the covid 19 pandemic allowing thousands of workers to perform their duties from the place where they live in a situation where many restrictions were enforced for travelling and getting people together. moreover, enhanced collaboration tools having many new features such as video conferencing, screen sharing and digital whiteboard have modernized how people get together and discuss their works. precisely, technology has made over how people engage in their work.
Technology itself can create a negative impact on the organizations to discontinue their smooth business operations. standing against cybersecurity attacks is crucial for even a well-established organization as they rely on the technology where cybersecurity attack can lead to loss of important resources, data and even the reputation of the organization. therefore security is one of the biggest challenge today many organizations face. on the other hand, the exponential growth of technology urges organizations to upgrade their systems more frequently in terms of versions, performance, product life span and vulnerabilities thus frequent funding on the technology can also be considered as a disadvantage.
in conclusion, it is accepted that technology has refashioned the ways people work and technology also creates some adverse problems at work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70666666667 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23622551062 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.4664919796 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.692307692 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302313041131 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117902884848 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908520837414 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221368371323 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089457223646 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.