Some people think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in a rural area. Compared the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside.
I always believe that human beings are the most convoluted creatures of nature, with different peculiarities and diverse behaviors. Therefore one should not say something about human nature and race because there is no such specific behavior that applied to all. The choices of living in between cities and villages are the very subjective opinion of every human.
To begin with life in the town: life will be hectic and like a race. Majority of them trying to pile up money and focused on material happiness. Moreover, for an ordinary man, city life is an opportunity to living a modern life. we can clearly see, there are so many facilities available to being luxury and happy: Five Stars Hotels, Sports Club, Film Hall, Adventures Games, internet and many more. In addition, if we are in some kind of trouble, we can find a modern solution in the town. For example, if we need to establish a business, we can consult with an entrepreneur, who definitely lives in cities. but in contrast, living in a city is seems unhealthy. peoples in a modern lifestyle; doing a job in an office, spending time on the internet, watching tv, are less physically stressed worked. spending a lot of time in that area is not really healthy. The main disadvantage is our physical health and eventually mental health. A study showed that people in America are more likely to affected by "depression" and "anxiety" which is the cause of hectic and pressured life in the city.
Secondly, living in the countryside is healthier; no air pollution, peace and clean, less interaction with peoples, no sound pollution no junk foods like in the city. Considering the health perspective, the village is more benificery. However, sometimes if someone needs to get bigger treatment like "surgery" or "diagnosis" of illness, definitely will be the best place to live. Otherwise, the village is much healthier.
To conclude, from the perspective of health, countryside life will be much better, but if we want luxury and a modern lifestyle, definitely we should go to the city. Both of them have some plusses and minuses points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in contrast, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04788732394 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16980897699 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585915492958 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.7033276166 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192795970772 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589957273946 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828813399378 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102963803528 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445843265881 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.