Some people think that cities are the best place to live. Others prefer to live in a rural area. Compared the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city to living in the countryside.
In recent years, many individuals assume that it is better to locate their home in urban areas. Although some people are opposed to this opinion, I think that settling in metropolises has both benefits and downsides compared to living in the outlying areas.
Those who are opposed to living in large cities have their own reasons based on the drawbacks of that. The first concern is air quality ruin. Every day, there are numberous vehicles on the road, releasing a significant amount of exhausted fumes into the surroundings. In long run, the air quality is getting worse and citizens may suffer from some dangerous diseases such as lung cancer or other lung-related illnesses. Secondly, the cost of living in urban areas is by far higher than that in the countryside. For example, the cost on housing is many times as much as that in rural areas. As a result, dwellers may find it difficult to save and spend money reasonably for their living.
Despite the aforementioned drawbacks, settling in cities also has advantages. Firstly, the job market there is wider. There is a variety of occupations ranging from manual jobs to intellectual ones, which opens many chances for people. Another advantage is the service and infrastructure are more concerned in cities, urban children may have more opportunities to receive qualified academic education than those who are living in outlying areas. Undoubtedly, without well-developed infrastructure, the economy of that city or even the country may not be improved.
In conclusion, although people living in large cities might face several downsides, they also receive the benefits from that compared to those who are living in countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16423357664 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87161346411 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9995169057 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73333333333 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302818079531 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084547915599 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103733043748 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197106884318 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810816087017 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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