High salaries
(Edited)
It would be argued that salaries should not be allowed to cross a certain level. In my opinion, however, earning high incomes may benefit societies.
Those who do not want high salaries to appear because this may cause a number of problems. One of the main issues is the appearance of the gap between rich and poor as beside high income families, there are various individuals who have their lives below the poverty line. These income disparities can demotivate workers who feel that the situation is unfair. Therefore, two incompatible sides appear in societies, which would cause economic imbalance and poverty and crime rates are likely to rise.
However, I would argue that there are various reasons why it might be considered beneficial to allow people to be pair extremelt high salaries. Firstly, these well-paif employees are likely to be highly motivated to work hard and therefore drive their businesses successfully. This should Result in a thriving economy and increased taxes revenues. Moreover, some usually fundraise for charities working in medical research or education. This has promoted pharmacy developement and enabled poor students to enter schools. As a result, the proportions of death and illiteracy have significantly decreased.
In conclusion, although earning high salaries is not always beneficial, I personally think that the advantages of this issue outweighed the drawbacks in the long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36607142857 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8270175205 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651785714286 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0491437587 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4615384615 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196266359663 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630922403659 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693944926814 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134318093188 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423596816185 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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