You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Mr. Watson,
This letter regards my keen interest in your published advertisement for the upcoming one-week walking tour in the mountains.
To begin with, I must say that this tour deems so exciting which actually feels like to be an amalgamation of fitness and sightseeing which I am so looking forward to. Though it sounds so Impressive, I do have some areas of concern to share.
Elaborating on the above, I would be interested in the details for exact dates and charges for the whole trip including Food, drinks, snacks etcetera. as well as any hidden costs. Moreover, details like payment by cash or cheque would really smoothen out any gaps whatsoever.
Most important of all, I must tell you that I do not possess an athlete body and have been keeping low for a while due to a prolonged sickness. Though I am not on medicines I do lack the stamina of an active runner. In this scenario, do you reckon it could be a concern of any kind? Please share your views as it would be a deciding factor for this trip.
Hope to receive the feedback soon from your side.
Yours sincerely,
Jack Nicolson.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ward to. Though it sounds so Impressive, I do have some areas of concern to share...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...ncluding Food, drinks, snacks etcetera. as well as any hidden costs. Moreover, det...
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Line 9, column 145, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or a while due to a prolonged sickness. Though I am not on medicines I do lack the sta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, look, moreover, really, so, then, well, while, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69696969697 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58305561468 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3868845209 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192775991429 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591625600752 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584793706441 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0920459874244 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0655934871738 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.