Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The discussion about whether or not the importance to keep old friends or to make new friends is a very controversial discussion. There are people on both sides of the policy who have very strong feelings. Some people feel that it is more important to make new friends, but most believe that to keep old friends is more essential . However, If I were forced to choose, I would raise my voice for that to continue relationship with old friend is very necessary. It is my firm belief that old friends are more precious than new friends for several reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, one of the reasons of my specific opinion is that the old friends can help us in our important jobs as they know ourselves for a long period of time. They can easily solve any problem because they know the suitable right way for us to solve the problems. They give us very important advices as we can solve our problem more easily. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. You see, my one friend could not do well in any new situation and he got a job as a teacher in foreign country. To me, the best advice I could give to my friend studying abroad is to be open to new experiences. Even though I have never left the country, I had a similar experience of journeying into the unknown on my first day teaching. You see, I decided to become a teacher because I thought it would be an easy job. But after my first day, I realized that teaching was much more demanding than I had anticipated. I finally understood that how something looks on paper is much different than reality. That’s something my friend is going to soon discover when he moves abroad, which is why I would strongly advise him to open up to new people and experiences while studying overseas. If I had not known him from many years ago I would never have given such types of advices.
Secondly, why I illustrate my specific opinion is that old friends know ourselves very much than the new friends. They can helps us to solve various esoteric problems in our learning. They also give us important advices how to solve any problem more easily as they know us for a long period of time. Drawing from my own experience, I remember when I was in junior high school and I wanted to join the football team. I was small and had never played much football before, but I wanted to try. My old friend didn’t think I’d like football very much, but he said that if I wanted to do it, I could. After three months of football practice and riding the bench I ended up hating football. All the kids picked on me because of my size and I wasn’t very good at tackling or catching. Even though I hated everything about the football team, I was and still am grateful for the experience. If my old friend hadn’t let me try, I would have blamed him for the way things turned out. At last I could understand the advices of old friends.
However some might argue that new friends are more important than old friends, but it is not true for all the time because may be new friends are helpful but they cannot help as like as old friends because old friends know us more profoundly than new friends.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe old friends are more important than new friends. This is because old friends can help us in our important jobs and old friends know ourselves very much than the new friends so they can helps us to solve various esoteric problems in our learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ous esoteric problems in our learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 104.0 43.0788530466 241% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2916.0 1977.66487455 147% => OK
No of words: 656.0 407.700716846 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44512195122 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06087906887 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4409865396 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.413109756098 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 887.4 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0918617614 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.064516129 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1612903226 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41935483871 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275772197846 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847204743747 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093253774542 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219910505124 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816236619865 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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