Don’t you think older people should practice more physical activities regularly in order to keep them healthy? I strongly agree with the fact that every people including older generation should involve in any kind of physical activities daily. This essay will discuss the importance of elderly people doing exercise daily and how they can practice this an daily habit.
At the outset, there are numerous factors which contribute to older generation healthiness but the utmost factor lies the fact of how frequently they follow physical activities. For an example a recent study demonstrate that 80% of time persons who are engaging in some kind of sport or go to gym are less likely to suffer from chronic diseases such as diabetes or heart diseases.
Notwithstanding the fact that utmost people are less likely to engage in a daily exercise routine, as their physical strength is degraded due to the age. However, when it comes to some physical activities they do not require much physical strength like gym activities, such as walking which help not only to regain the physical health but also mental health. As an illustration, studies reveal that 80% of older people in Europe consider walking not as a physical activity but as a hobby. Therefore, the importance of obtaining a physical activity such as walking at the older age is undeniable.
After analyzing the above facts, in can be concluded that there is an clear evidence older people should follow a exercise routine in order to refrain from any physical or mental ill health, although the less physical strength should not be overlooked.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
... order to keep them healthy? I strongly agree with the fact that every people including older generation...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...se daily and how they can practice this an daily habit. At the outset, there are ...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...acts, in can be concluded that there is an clear evidence older people should foll...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ear evidence older people should follow a exercise routine in order to refrain fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, therefore, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04135338346 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64355224605 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533834586466 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.557546027 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.1 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208124400084 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952505454393 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663937892816 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145781315484 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0857112534507 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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