In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Younger generation of 21st century neither follow news channels nor read newspapers. In the following contemplation, I will discuss various causes of this trend and the solutions for improving this situation.
Teenagers of this era are mostly glued to their mobile social networking sites and laptops. Therefore, they do not have time for following the international and national news as they remain busy with their own engagements. For instance, according to a research most of the adolescents would love to spend time browsing Facebook and Instagram rather than watching news. Moreover, teenagers who are employed are least interested in watching news channels. Since they are so tired after working for a continuous nine hour shift that they loose interest in watching news channels. For example, employees who reach home after a busy work schedule often love to watch entertaining and comedy channels instead of watching news which is mostly non-entertaining.
Various solutions to resolve this issue includes short news being displayed on social media platforms such as Facebook. Another solution is to include entertainment sections along with regular news on news channels and newspapers as it would increase viewers interest in watching the latest news. A short summary of the ongoing famous TV shows can be in included to attract youngsters who follow famous TV shows such as Big boss, reality shows, national talent hunts etc.
In conclusion, I believe that nowadays teenagers are interested in social networking sites whereas working professions remain busy with their work routine. Therefore, it is better to include positive news that include some sort of entertainment to attract young viewers. This would increase their enthusiasm and they would be more interested in watching the news channels and reading newspapers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'shift' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'shifts'.
Suggestion: shifts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46666666667 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84181068432 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550877192982 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8178486582 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164650669855 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652187690086 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389681185356 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11609894759 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354147758885 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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