Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
When it comes to using leisure time, some people prefer to use this time as doing several activities, while others are prone to pause all of the activities for relaxing. This essay will discuss both opinions and I would explain why making a balance between the two of them is vital.
First of all, there are many people who want to make the most out of their spare time. They might not allow themselves just to rest during leisure time. Those types of people might struggle more with doing nothing during leisure time. They tend to read books or articles which they have been waiting for. Filling the blank in word puzzles or solving the problem in the corner of the newspaper, such activities are the way of enjoying leisure time them. In order to enlighten the mind, these activities are indispensable in their leisure time.
On the other hand, there are some people who tend to pause all of the activities in their leisure time. Being relaxed and relieved is integral to them rather than gaining knowledge. Getting out of the trajectory of limitless thinking is more important to them. They regard leisure time as a process of recovery and reducing their stress. They sleep or do nothing with the aim of resetting their mind.
All in all, in terms of using leisure time, both types are necessary to humans. We need to chill out as doing nothing when we are so exhausted, but we also feel fresh by reading and doing some activities in leisure time. I am convinced that we need varied time to spend our leisure time well. Therefore, in my opinion, there is no superior method of making an ideal leisure time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, therefore, well, while, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64808362369 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27616023991 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540069686411 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0844256113 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4705882353 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469475329031 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147869908821 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077829607225 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284703582139 0.151304729494 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404135066723 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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