Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. Do you agree or disagree?
A number of experts claim that music is one of the best way of connecting people of various ages and culture in one unit. I totally agree on this statement, because it is the easy and popular medium of sharing feeling, emotion and awaking people in convenience way. This essay will examine the arguments on favor of the topic.
To begin with, songs and music are universal language, that everyone can adopt its melody easily. Every people have different taste and preference on music. Despite of language barrier music can connect people easily from various ages to religion and respect the singer without trying to know, they are relate to which religion, culture and nation. Similarly, music also play vital role in awaring people, connecting people in social issues and help needed people. For example, famous singer of today generation Taylor Swift had organized a charity program through music concert to help to people who are under extreme poverty and fund was collected more than expected from all over the world. likewise, in Nepal also we can hear many songs which deliver awareness about different emerging issues.
On the other hand, concert is becoming one of the popular place for today’s generation to hang out a d refreshment from hustle and bustle life. However, not only youth aged people are also enjoying such types of program. As it is becoming best place to create memory for life and making new friends from various places. For instance, in modern world due to the advanced technology live music are also becoming popular medium of connecting people.
In conclusion, music is universal accepted language from ages, hence not only for refreshment sometime it plays crucial role in uniting people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, likewise, similarly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05594405594 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36966995872 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7506551754 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222357270966 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819237001714 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747201295965 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126722683697 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831051240624 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.