Doctors recommend that older people should get exercise, However, many older people do not take enough execrcise, what could be the reason for those? What can be done to encourage them to take exercise.
At the present, many new diseases are come through differently and it also more affected older people because their immune power is a week, on that basis they should do exercise and other family members are uphold them.
Why they are not doing the exercise in daily cause older person is scared of the two things. First is the physical strength they think like we can not do thise types of activities so at that time relatives and friends must stimulate them to do light exercise. Second, the problem is an old person who has some illness like joint pain, B.p, asthma and other someone. But at the same time, other society members helped them and give information about them to do yoga and walking activities, in that case, they feel reasonable and also keep continue.
On the other hand, the government also take some step to stimulate the old community to do some advisement on social media and also make some video on how to do light activities at home and realised on the television so that directly help them. And also provide them with some product to support them so they don't need others.
In conclusion, older people should take it seriously it directly succour their body. But one thing which must be taken care of by the family members they do only that exercise which can be suggested by the doctor. Not did unnecessarily activities directly affects their health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'upheld'.
Suggestion: upheld
...o exercise and other family members are uphold them. Why they are not doing the ex...
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Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...th some product to support them so they dont need others. In conclusion, older p...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'succours'?
Suggestion: succours
...le should take it seriously it directly succour their body. But one thing which must be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72314049587 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34186718593 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566115702479 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5786035419 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.3 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230793179732 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953709313807 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723719430215 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152979125532 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065828270587 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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