The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares how many tourists used three different airports in City of New York from 1995 and 2000.
It is clear that LaGuardia was the most popular airport over the 5-year period, and a gradual rise can be seen in the number of tourists each year. Similarly, the figures for Newark increased until 1998, surpassing those for John F.Kennedy, and stayed constant by 2000. Unlike LaGuardia and Newark, the number of people who visited John F Kennedy airport fluctuated over the period of 5 years.
Between 1995 and 1997, the number of people visiting John F Kennedy airport rose substan...
- Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teacher 95
- The table below shows the percentage of Australian households with access to computers or internet 1998 2000 Summarize the information by choosing and identifying the main features and make comparisons where relevant 44
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