The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares how many tourists used three different airports in City of New York from 1995 and 2000.
It is clear that LaGuardia was the most popular airport over the 5-year period, and a gradual rise can be seen in the number of tourists each year. Similarly, the figures for Newark increased until 1998, surpassing those for John F.Kennedy, and stayed constant by 2000. Unlike LaGuardia and Newark, the number of people who visited John F Kennedy airport fluctuated over the period of 5 years.
Between 1995 and 1997, the number of people visiting John F Kennedy airport rose substan...
- The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 93
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