The levels of youth crimes are increasing rapidly in most cities of the world. What are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions.
Nowadays in most cities, it is of n6 doubt that the rates at which youths commit crimes are increasing significantly around the globe. This undisputable fact has gotten to a head. There are plethora reasons for this ill effect trend in the world and measures which can be taken to see that the situation is curtailed. These causes and remedies shall be discussed below in the preceding paragraphs.
First and foremost, it is certain that the major cause of this trend in the world today is poverty. The increase in poverty has brought about a rise in youth crime. Poverty has been the main ro...
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Is it possible i get an 8 if
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and measures which can be taken to see that the situation is curtailed.
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when they grows, are out of control and can pertake into committing atrocities.
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Sentence: Nowadays in most cities, it is of n6 doubt that the rates at which youths commit crimes are increasing significantly around the globe.
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Sentence: This undisputable fact has gotten to a head.
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