In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With the increased use of computers, the Internet, and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home.
Nowadays how people work has changed more significantly than in the past. Since the development in information and communications technology, some people have chosen to work from home, while others prefer working in their workplace. There are both advantages and disadvantages to this trend.
On the one hand, working from home has some benefits. Firstly, it can give workers more flexibility in their working lives, which may be particularly useful for parents having small children who need to be taken care of or people who live far from their place of work. Secondly, it is much more comfortable to work from home because people can take a break whenever they want. Another advantage related to this is that people have the possibility to work for companies in other countries by using the Internet, which means that they can apply for jobs not only in their local area but also in other workplaces in the world.
On the other hand, this type of work has also some drawbacks. Traveling to work and working in an office with others can be regarded as a sociable society which many people enjoy especially if they live alone. Without this social interaction, they would be able to feel very lonely. Furthermore, this may make people easier to lack sufficient discipline to complete the work they need to do if they are not surrounded by their colleagues.
In conclusion, from the things mentioned above, this development has both benefits and drawbacks. One of the most ideal arrangements would be to spend part of the week working in the office with colleagues around, and part of the week working at home with a certain amount of comfort and flexibility.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89361702128 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70106641359 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542553191489 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8362199097 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.153846154 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411697738563 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148181938663 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950819352233 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251559536327 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918298675366 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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