In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
It is said that with the increase of internet and technology devices this day, more and more people are working online than in the past. While there are some drawbacks to this trend, however, it would be a positive trend.
On the one hand, an online business could bring on workers or even employments negative effect. Working online could not provide the best quality as face-to-face work because when people run their jobs at home, there are lots of distractions that make the employee lose their attention. Take online jobs as an example, people who work from home might be distracted by their family or their stuff. Therefore, working in a workplace can ensure individuals focus on their tasks because of its work environment.
On the other hand, the benefits of online business can not be ignored. People who want to increase their income can take a great number of jobs on the Internet in their free time and those all jobs only require individuals to have a private technology device with an Internet connection. Working online not only encourage people to save effort but also provide people with more chances to develop their career. Even more, it could solve the unemployment problem in most countries. For instance, when the covid-19 spread all over the world, online businesses assisted individuals to continue their work at home.
All things considered, working online still includes some problems. Besides, an online business could help individuals to save time and effort. For that reason, the employee can get more chances to raise their living standard.
- It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening Do you agree or disagree 80
- Nations should spend more money on skills and vocational training for practical work rather than on university education To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- In the modern world it is possible to shop work and communicate online and live without any face to face contact with others Is this a positive or negative development 56
- Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this sets a bad example to young people To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening Do you agree or disagree 80
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04597701149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51431508793 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536398467433 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7884524895 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317498839816 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119083806204 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10862186046 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210866495927 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07814655491 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.