Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the potty in the world others say that economic growth should we stop the immediately to stop damaging the environment discussion Both side and give your opinion
In this present era, poverty is a very common topic for discussion. While few people believe that economic development is mandatory to decline poverty in the world, others are not supporting that idea. They feel economic growth is harmful to the environment, it should be stopped immediately. This essay will explain both aspects and also gives my opinion, that described in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of reasons which indicated economic development is reasonable for reducing the poverty. First and foremost, if economic development is started, then the numbers of new industries are increased. That provides job and work, which will help people to earn enough money. Furthermore, because of more industries of the same products. That creates competition which will reduce the price of respective products. That also helps to reduce poverty. For example, since the government of India started industrialization, the poverty rate was decreased. That was written by one survey of The University of Gujarat.
However, economic growth is harmful to the environment and society. Firstly, economical growth is happened because of globalization and industrialization, which generates various types of pollution such as air pollution, soil pollution, and water pollution. In addition, that pollutions directly or indirectly affect humans, animals as well as birds too. For instance, after the economic growth, the menkind is suffering from different disease.
To conclude, although economical growth help to reduce the poverty, that also harms nature. In my words, the authority should be stopped the growth of the economy because that is dangerous to the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58301158301 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02780011403 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5384890374 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3888888889 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26021957042 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750522595631 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656904382838 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160298724284 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521134513757 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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