Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircuts, and beauty products to enhance their appearance. Some people think that it is a good way to spend money, while others think that there is a better way to spend it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Human beings are instinctively attracted to beauty and, accordingly, do everything to manipulate the environment they live in so they can quench this feeling. Some people go one step further and pay a lot of attention to their appearance, thus, spend their money on clothes, shoes, and the like. However, this behaviour is questioned by critics who believe there are better ways for spending money. I admit that I am categorized in the former group, even though the other group of people overlook important considerations. Hence, this essay aims to address each group's reasons to provide a better un...
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overlook important considerations.
overlook the important considerations.
there are more crucial issues deserve to be invested in.
there are more crucial issues deserved to be invested in.
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Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 470 350
No. of Characters: 2231 1500
No. of Different Words: 256 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.656 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.747 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.661 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 158 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 113 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.738 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.286 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.505 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.071 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5