Human being are imitated by nature. They tend to copy the clothing style and other cosumerable items that advert by celebrities. I firmly agree that the practice of follow each others to look modern and update is increasing day by day.
First of all, many youngsters are considered celebrities as there role model and try to adapt their style of clothing. That is being the reason of popularity of Western clothes . As most the famous actress wear different types of Western clothes and people like them. By the influence of them, whether that clothing style suit on them or not . Moreover, youth is also considered it as a symbol of modern people and they feel uncomfortable in their traditional clothes, thus imitate others to look like them.
Furthermore, not only the clothing style but many other types of cosumerable goods are also influenced by popularity of fashion . For instance, now a days people do not like to have smart phone and buy I-phones just to show off their status and flaunt in front of others . Even though all the features all available in smartphones. Apart from it, the fancinating advertisements of products by famous celebrities also entice them to buy more and more products, whether they are of their use or not. This type of adverts easily fall customer to their trap, especially the women's.
To conclude, copy each other or imitate the lifestyle of their favourite personality is found in vogue nowadays and this trend tend to rise by each passing day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, thus, apart from, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89328063241 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66221233657 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561264822134 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.850711282 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4285714286 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120599363779 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544554919283 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653372133386 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742685408023 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035125070121 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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