Many people think that students should be allowed to choose the subjects they study in school, whereas others feel that they should study a set curriculum.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this decade, acquiring a good and satisfactory education has become very important. While it can be proclaimed that all students should study have the exact syllabus and the other opinion is that students can decide which subjects they want to study at school. In this essay I look into either side of this argument and showcase the opinion.
On our basis, there are no. of reasons why people believe that students should can pick it out what they want to study. The focal point is, students can show their 99% of their interest while studying and understanding their favorite subjects. They can get good results and without any stress they can learn and practice well before their exams.
Anyways students can’t put their interest in the subject which they don’t like it and knowingly they can’t get their approximate results.
The other reason is, having different types of subjects to each student is a difficult task for the teachers to guide them in the proper way. Even though, students can’t get the proper concentration towards the irrespective subject.
In spite of these, the difference in the opinion, “Students should go on with only the particular subjects in which every student must and should have the same subjects so that they can be stronger at least in the basics of the subject which they actually no need to learn in the deeper way.”
Moreover, it will be difficult task to school management to handle the student particular subject where one-to-one student could not even match in the all subjects.
In conclusion, my personal point of view is that every student need to undergo with the same subjects where others should also need to be trained so that they can understand the society and can be well balanced in everything. Other than that, after certain age i.e., at 18 they can choose their particular subjects and can choose their own path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, at least, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 7.85571142285 318% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9125 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46125444388 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 103.140393777 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.923076923 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304361434354 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114549115364 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951479224569 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164900776366 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605554922752 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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