In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday.
Do you agree or disagree?
completely agree
In the coming years, most people would choose to have domestic travel vacation plans than having international vacations. I completely agree to the statement.
In the past, the occupation for most people were very much relaxed and so were the ambitions of the people. The job didn't demand major portion of the time from people lives. Therefore, people had more time to relax and go on foreign trips for holidays. In the present and at the rate the current trend is progressing, most people do not have time for themselves leave alone for holidays. The jobs have become more demanding with increase in want for higher packages and luxuries. People are now more into quick weekend getaways. The frequency of holidays have increased but the duration of holiday and time of travel has been reduced. Furthermore, the nearby sites to cities have been restored and upgraded with more facilities which has resulted in more tourist attractions. With increase in concrete and pollution in cities, people, nowadays, tend to go on more hiking trips, nearby beaches, hill stations or just reconnect with nature.
In addition to the above points, there is always a factor of cost and new complex processes of international travel. Any international trip would require a substantial budget. A short trip to neighboring country itself would require a budged of minimum fifteen thousand. However, a trip to neighboring place would need a budget of minimum five thousand. Therefore, domestic travel is more cost effective. Also, with the recent pandemic, international travel process has been upgraded and new travel restrictions has been added. Now, for international travel, there is need to do lab test and show result on arrival which though is necessary but causes unnecessary stress.
In conclusion to the above points, I am confident that there will be further more increase in domestic holidays than international travel in the coming future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...re the ambitions of the people. The job didnt demand major portion of the time from p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16560509554 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75730711107 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541401273885 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2704423448 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3684210526 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5263157895 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221127674854 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715232619627 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594128590569 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136303249935 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339784879364 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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