Do you agree or disagree with the following statement In the past young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives Use spe
Life is like a tortuous way in a mountain in quite a few aspects. This journey, with all its ups and downs will come to some bifurcations, which are significantly important in everyone's life and can substantially affect the young people's future. It is incontrovertibly axiomatic that the most influential people who can assist the young in these life-changing events are parents. As far as helping children in decisions is concerned, some are of the opinion that today young people are more dependent on their parents than they were in the past, while others believe otherwise. I-for one- subscribe to the latter idea on the ground that in today's world the young are more informed, have more freedom in their life, and parents cannot be a mentor as they used to be.
First and foremost, living in the technology era with its huge sources of information, young people have sufficiently enough knowledge about every situation in which they are. Therefore, knowing the all aspects of their options, they can opt more conveniently and also effectively. Consider a juvenile who wants to opt his or her major in college as an example, they can read about the careers' on internet, talk to a consultant, etc. to acquire information, which makes them less dependent on their parents.
Second, nowadays, children have more independency from their parents than their forefathers had. In the old days, for instance, people usually had to choose their fathers' job as their future career, however, in today's world the young can opt for anything they want. Moreover, in these days parents are more supportive of their kids' decisions and let them to be independent because they know this would help them in their future life, the attribution which were sadly lacking in the parents of old days.
The last but not the least reason which reinforces the assertion that young people are less dependent on their parents these days has to do with the ability of parents to help their children. To be more specific, in the modern world of today, with its galloping progress, parent cannot keep the pace of this development and they are as resourceful as they need to be to advise their kids. There are so many factors that can affect the decision of young people so much so that parents cannot be knowledgeable about all of them, unlike their fathers. As a result, it is not easy for parents to control every decision of their children and they have to let them be more involved.
All in all, taken into account what was already mentioned, I do believe that the young are not as dependent on their parents as their ancestors were since they can obtain data easily, they have more freedom, and parents cannot be well-informed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83836206897 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64633321433 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471982758621 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.5074594511 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.058823529 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2941176471 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41176470588 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351676448493 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134245307107 0.076458572812 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737799993694 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219901305231 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599250964029 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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