Dear Gautam,
I hope you had an amazing weekend.
Anyways, I am writing this letter to seek help with setting up the equipment for tomorrow's meeting from your end.
I have a presentation on "Digital Marketing" in the auditorium of the tower-1 building at 10 am. I would need your help in setting up the desired equipment for the presentation.
You probably do not know that I have no experience in setting up such devices and you are kind of an expert in those things. I wonder if you can arrange the HDMI cable, mike, speakers, and projector for delivering my presentation because I have invited more than 100 people.
Furthermore, I will be leaving from office after lunch as I have to reach the office tomorrow early morning to inspect all the necessary arrangements including the snacks and lunch during break time for all guests.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Shwatank
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 91, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'an' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
... in setting up such devices and you are kind of an expert in those things. I wonder if you...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom you soon. Best regards, Shwatank
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, furthermore, if, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96202531646 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88477096857 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677215189873 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6978178529 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349909364091 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128508262759 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119349449355 0.0603063233224 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156002598735 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988819827741 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 91, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'an' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
... in setting up such devices and you are kind of an expert in those things. I wonder if you...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom you soon. Best regards, Shwatank
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, furthermore, if, look, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96202531646 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88477096857 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677215189873 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6978178529 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349909364091 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128508262759 0.0766984524023 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119349449355 0.0603063233224 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156002598735 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988819827741 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.