In today's modern era, some scientists believe that genetic characteristics have more influence on humans personality and development as compared to experience in their life. However, I believe that the impact of life experience is more significant for overall humans development. In this essay I will discuss this in details.
On one hand, it is true that everyone is unique and they are born with different traits. While some people are born with few character, others might be born with multiple traits. People could not choose their genetics characters. And these character will develop more when they get adults. Therefore many experts believe that characteristics we are born with have much more influence on person's life.
On other hand, if we could utilise the experience we gain from working or travelling abroad or education we would be more mature and more open-minded. For example, when we go at new place, we can learn the cultures and traditions from the locals to acquire more information about lifestyle of others and we become more knowledge. In addition, we may also gain more knowledge about own lifestyle. For instance, we will make a plan for future, we will organise own expenditure very well.
Furthermore, community and family condition have a deeper effect on person's character. For example, a person born in broken family as a result, he will become a pessimistic person when he will grow up. Another example, a man might be a positive person, but he spent so much time with negative friends so he become same as them.
In conclusion, life experience has major consequences on our personality and development than the traits that we are born with. We will be able to think in different way and take proper decisions and also become self-independent if we use the experience that we gained from our daily life and education.
- Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life Which do you consider to be the major influence Give reasons for your answer and include 61
- Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life Which do you consider to be the major influence Give reasons for your answer and include 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02265372168 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8697382491 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537216828479 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5889425017 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2941176471 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403207893726 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132985723062 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106035978747 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219680299105 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708241512575 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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