Crime is a big problem in the world; many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, criminal activities have become prevalent in the world. It is considered as one of the major issues which are not only tedious to control but also difficult to be safeguarding oneself. I completely agree with this statement and will cite the reasons to advocate my view.
The crime rate is growing incessantly even if innumerable restrictions, laws, and regulations are in place. The key factors of growing criminality are poverty, illiteracy, and hatred towards other's faith. On one hand, individuals from the destitute class commit crimes in order to fulfill their basic needs including food, while on the other illustrious people follow this path to satisfy their greed. A survey carried out by a recognized university states that crimes are more common in developing countries than in developed, due to the economic condition of the citizens. Henceforth, it is being believed that prevention of crime is next to impossible in this world.
Although it is not plausible to eradicate crime and criminals from this world, administrative bodies can impose stringent rules and restrictions to control it. Furthermore, each nation in this world already has varied departments responsible for maintaining law and order as well as secure their country from external criminals or terrorists. Criminal-minded people including hackers, robbers, and psychotic killers only to name a few should be given strict punishments like life-sentence to discourage further crimes.
To conclude, even if the crime is a grave problem that is next to impossible to eradicate, it can be controlled by the administrative body by imposing strict laws and orders as well as by giving stringent punishments to criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37777777778 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10395119671 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7533474634 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160888229945 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619384646471 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671475361792 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958399068947 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217522486934 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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