Modern education becomes a hotly debated topic in the last decade since the generations are changing significantly fast and the means of teaching are needed to be changed as well. The kids nowadays acquire knowledge from the Internet and are better at technologies than their parents, since the development of the IT world was enormous right at the time when they were born. According to that, the community splits into those who want their children to be advanced in that world and others who think that adolescents need to resemble their parents.
The former believe that studying innovative disciplines like Technology, Physics, and Biology is essential, due to the fact that it will help to keep up with modernity and increase the potential chance to obtain a highly qualified profession. For instance, high school students with academic achievements in Mathematics and Information Technologies are more likely to enroll in prestigious universities, after which they receive a highly paid job. The demand for such professionals is extremely high on account of the rapid growth of this field.
The opposite opinion is shared by conservative parents, who value liberal arts more, especially such subject as History. The reason for that is the importance to preserve the heritage of ancestors because it unites people and sets an example for present society. An absence of knowledge about a native country is unacceptable, otherwise, the identity can be lost too. The examples of famous people life can inspire a kid, the mistakes of previous generations can prevent a child from his own.
In conclusion, both subjects are equally essential for a school program, therefore I personally think that neither of them can be excluded from students life. History gives a person beliefs, exact sciences provide proficiency.
- Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects Others think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than History Discuss both these views and give your opinion 84
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Some people belive that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
- The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in differnt countries in 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisos where relevant 78
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 309, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
... their parents since the development of the IT world was enormous right at the time wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18556701031 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80765898029 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628865979381 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 291.0 20.2975951904 1434% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1509.0 106.682146367 1414% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 291.0 20.7667163134 1401% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 52.0 7.06120827912 736% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188726192464 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188726192464 0.084324248473 224% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103386117796 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046031400269 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 148.5 13.0946893788 1134% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -232.35 50.2224549098 -463% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 118.0 11.3001002004 1044% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.3 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.06 8.58950901804 268% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 118.4 10.1190380762 1170% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 118.0 10.7795591182 1095% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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