Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him. Another friend of yours is willing to go.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-explain why you cannot go anymore
-say who can go instead of you
-say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Vasu,
I hope you are doing well. I know that we have planned to see the Furious part 9 which is going to be released on coming Friday in the cinemas. However, I won’t be able to join on Friday because I’ll be traveling to India due to a family occasion. So, I am writing this letter to tell you that I am sorry for canceling the next meet-up plan.
I have to attend the marriage of my cousin, and my presence is necessary for this function since my mother can’t go alone in the marriage. I am sorry for not informing you earlier about the event.
Besides, I have to inform Lisa who is my other friend about my weekend plans as she had already made the bookings of two movie tickets in advance. If you feel comfortable with her to come along with you. Please let me know in advance so that I can drop a text on her WhatsApp that you'll be joining her on Friday evening instead of me.
You'll enjoy her company because she loves to play snooker at midnight club just like you after the movie. Plus, you guys have a similar taste in eating street food near the cinema where we usually go to have small meals. Once again, I feel sorry for not joining on Friday.
Looking forward to seeing you soon on my return.
Best regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... wont be able to join on Friday because Ill be traveling to India due to a family o...
^^^
Line 5, column 107, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ssary for this function since my mother cant go alone in the marriage I am sorry for...
^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...oliday due to the busy work schedule Besides I have to inform Lisa who is my other f...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...o that I can drop a message to her that youll be joining her on Friday evening instea...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You'll
... her on Friday evening instead of me Youll enjoy her company because she loves to ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13414634146 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03306090372 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581300813008 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 246.0 16.3608247423 1504% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1017.0 76.5299724578 1329% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 246.0 16.8248392259 1462% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 56.0 4.34317383033 1289% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264826046292 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.264826046292 0.0766984524023 345% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148081117755 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418113331746 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 121.0 8.37731958763 1444% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -152.83 70.7449484536 -216% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 95.7 7.45979381443 1283% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.15 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.96 7.59969072165 236% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 8.62886597938 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 100.4 8.54432989691 1175% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 121.0 8.15463917526 1484% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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