write about your new school year
A new school year have just started. This school year might be the momentous year in my life. I am going to take the annual high school entrance exam.
My aims are Hanoi Amsterdam, Foreign language specialized school and HNUE high school. These are all top prestigious high schools in Vietnam. In order to commence, i have to be a top- notch student. i'm not very pleased with any particular subject as those school i've mentioned above are for those who has been aiming since the beginning of secondary. And for me,a ninth-grader who has just started since the beginning of the second term in the final secondary year, i find it arduous and nearly unattainable to commence those school. I'm quite content with my conditional English, however, the specialized English are precarious. My major aim - Hanoi Amsterdam is sophisticated to achiece. Still. nothing can stop me from dreaming.
Since December, i've exerted myself to burn the midnight oil. I have burnt the candle at both ends to study specialized english. i've been cramming mock exam for the real exam in the next two months. I've rarely hit the sack for more than 4 hours a day. Instead, i've been hitting the book really much. Everytime i stop trying, i think of those who despise me, those who defy my ability and make presumptuous assumptions about me. The glorious and prestigious reputation and aura of Hanoi Amsterdam somehow make my heart flutter everytime i hear its name.
I know this is burdensome and demanding, but i write this letter to inform you about my efforts. This is onerous and burdensome but my will is undefeatable. Hope by the middle of July i can write another report to you about my enrollment in Hanoi Amsterdam.
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...e the annual high school entrance exam My aims are Hanoi Amsterdam Foreign lang...
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...nam In order to commence i have to be a top notch student im not very pleased with any pa...
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... any particular subject as those school ive mentioned above are for those who has b...
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...second term in the final secondary year i find it arduous and nearly unattainable...
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...y unattainable to commence those school Im quite content with my conditional Engli...
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...ized English are precarious My major aim Hanoi Amsterdam is sophisticated to achi...
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...till nothing can stop me from dreaming Since December ive exerted myself to bur...
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...top me from dreaming Since December ive exerted myself to burn the midnight oil...
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... both ends to study specialized english ive been cramming mock exam for the real ex...
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...or the real exam in the next two months Ive rarely hit the sack for more than 4 hou...
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...ack for more than 4 hours a day Instead ive been hitting the book really much Every...
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... hitting the book really much Everytime i stop trying i think of those who despis...
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...ook really much Everytime i stop trying i think of those who despise me those who...
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...somehow make my heart flutter everytime i hear its name I know this is burden...
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... heart flutter everytime i hear its name I know this is burdensome and demanding ...
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...ow this is burdensome and demanding but i write this letter to inform you about m...
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...undefeatable Hope by the middle of July i can write another report to you about m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, second, so, still, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65646258503 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57578231652 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 294.0 20.2975951904 1448% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1369.0 106.682146367 1283% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 294.0 20.7667163134 1416% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 52.0 7.06120827912 736% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214602680247 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214602680247 0.084324248473 254% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148830171224 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112416390558 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 147.5 13.0946893788 1126% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -218.47 50.2224549098 -435% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 116.8 11.3001002004 1034% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.23 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.96 8.58950901804 244% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 119.6 10.1190380762 1182% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.67 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.