The bar chart compares how much coffee and drink Australian in five different cities consumed.
It is clear that Australian citizens having a habit of going to a café for coffee or tea in last 4 week accounted for the highest proportion, except in Adelaide while the figure for fresh coffee in last 4 weeks reach the lowest point.
Most of Australian in Melbourne took a cup of coffee or tea in café shop in last weeks, with a figure showing around 64%, followed by Hobart, Sydney, Brisbane and Adelaide with the figure being slightly lower 63%, 61%, 55%, 49%, respectively.
Surprisingly, the proportion of people in all cities who bought fresh coffee in last 4 weeks was lower than 45%, especially figures for Melbourne, Sydney, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart was 42%, 44%, 34%, 34% and 38% respectively. The figures for buying instant coffee in all cities was slightly higher than those for buying fresh coffee in all five different cities, even these figures in Brisbane and Adelaide doubled the percentage of Australian buying fresh coffee in the two cities.
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 56
- The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: 34
... Brisbane Adelaide and Hobart was 42 44 34 34 and 38 respectively The figures for buy...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54795972602 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 180.0 22.4926829268 800% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 852.0 112.824112599 755% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 180.0 22.9334400587 785% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185730131752 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185730131752 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130088691632 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558991037966 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 90.8 13.2329268293 686% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -94.3 61.2550243902 -154% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 71.1 10.3012195122 690% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.34 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 14.76 8.06136585366 183% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 11.4329268293 464% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 74.0 10.9970731707 673% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 91.0 11.0658536585 822% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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