The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette.
"On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."
Author recommends to limit the number of rental mopeds, because author thinks that this measure will be effective in reducing accidents in the Balmer Island. But, in order to validate the argument, author must answer some crucial questions regarding population-traffic relation and comparison of Balmer Island with Seaville Island.
First of fall, author's premise that the increase of population needs to be compensated with limitation on number of rental mopeds, is based on assumption that increase in population implies increased traffic. But question arises , "is this increased population ...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2013-10-14 | arunabh05 | 70 | view |
| 2013-10-02 | kishorbhandari23 | 70 | view |
| 2013-08-19 | rockingboy | 70 | view |
| 2013-06-29 | tTONY FRANKIE | 80 | view |
| 2013-02-24 | utkarshece | 80 | view |
- The vice president of human resources at Climpson Industries sent the following recommendation to the company's president."A recent national survey found that the majority of workers with access to the Internet at work had used company computers for perso 80
- The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them not by their contemporaries 66
- In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should be required to step down after five years 92
- In most professions and academic fields imagination is more important than knowledge 81
- According to a recent report, cheating among college and university students is on the rise. However, Groveton College has successfully reduced student cheating by adopting an honor code, which calls for students to agree not to cheat in their academic en 33
Sentence: Another question which is needed to answered is, 'Are mopeds significant cause for accidents in Balmer Islands?
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to to and answered
It is on top list:
http://www.testbig.com/essay-categories/gmatgre
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 418 350
No. of Characters: 2236 1500
No. of Different Words: 192 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.522 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.349 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.845 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 205 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 146 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 96 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.584 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.371 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.183 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5