When families have meal hen families have meal together it is considered to social activity. Do you think eating together is important to people in your country?
When some people gather together it is considering as a social activity. Having meal together is a symbol of unity. In my country people love to have food together.
As, it is common saying “ Family that eats together stays together”. In my culture, families prefer to have meal together at one table this strengthens the bound between them. For example, having dinner together is a great opportunity for every member to discus their daily activities. Also,it is the way to be more connected and updated of your sibling and parents. In my home we usually discuss our problem to our father and mother at our dinner. Furthermore, I would like to say is family mealtime is the perfect thing to teach appropriate manners, etiquette and social skills.
However, in developing countries time runs too fast people are busy with their work and do not have enough time for the family for which they are working to feed. Parents are engaged with their jobs paying less attention to family get to gather. In result losing the connection.
To put in a nutshell, I pen down saying that when the family eats together, it is considering as social event. In conclusion, what matters most in this world are those people who stick with you, either you are in your ups and downs in your life and that’s your family, so make time for them and have meal together.
- Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child s development However others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- When families have meal hen families have meal together it is considered to social activity Do you think eating together is important to people in your country 56
- When families have meal together it is considered to social activity Do you think eating together is important to people in your country 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61016949153 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31464555118 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 236.0 20.2975951904 1163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1088.0 106.682146367 1020% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 236.0 20.7667163134 1136% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 68.0 7.06120827912 963% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.522543662616 0.244688304435 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.522543662616 0.084324248473 620% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333934050666 0.151304729494 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133752405357 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 118.3 13.0946893788 903% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -159.6 50.2224549098 -318% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 94.2 11.3001002004 834% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.94 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.22 8.58950901804 212% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 96.4 10.1190380762 953% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 10.7795591182 510% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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