The child’s development is most important for human future. Some consider that parents play vital role in children development while other contra-indict that the television and friends have the most significant influence. In my opinion, both are the pillars of children development.
Patents are the first teacher in children life that’s why they are highly responsible for initially development. They teach us how to talk, how to eat moreover, how to walk.For instance, toddlers learn language from his or her mother. Parents mentor their child with responsibility, emotion and sense between wrong and right. All their actions are for betterment of their infants. For example, during my childhood my parents had strict rules and regulation,I often used to dislike it, however today I can understand their purpose of being strict.
While on the other hand, we can not deny the impact of television and friends on our little once. As, now the gadgets are curial part of our life. Children spent most of their time on television.To illustrate, children can learn English faster by watching cartoon on television. Additionally, there are many programs which help to develop the memory and can make our child more active or brilliant. While in school children communicate with their friends that help them to learn the social behavior. Additionally, they learn how to perform in a group.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that primary growth and development depends on parents but television and friends are also necessary for the secondary maturation.
- When families have meal together it is considered to social activity Do you think eating together is important to people in your country 56
- Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child s development However others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- When families have meal hen families have meal together it is considered to social activity Do you think eating together is important to people in your country 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15322580645 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68934383063 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 248.0 20.2975951904 1222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1278.0 106.682146367 1198% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 248.0 20.7667163134 1194% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 144.0 7.06120827912 2039% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231043197231 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231043197231 0.084324248473 274% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170444537735 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15951017282 0.056905535591 280% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 126.8 13.0946893788 968% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -180.24 50.2224549098 -359% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 100.0 11.3001002004 885% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.07 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.69 8.58950901804 229% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 101.2 10.1190380762 1000% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 127.0 10.7795591182 1178% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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