Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior.
Which actions to be taken to prevent people from having this problem.
In this fast-growing world, people who are purchasing things which are not required and which can not be affordable is a major concern across the globe, and has became more controversial. There are many causes behind this problem of buying unnecessary things, some of them include influence of social media and to have better life standards. After a close scrutiny, i believe that it is a negative trend and it should be prevented. To alleviate this problem, the mentioned root causes need to be addressed through less usage of social media and this view shall be elaborated upon in the following paragraph.
At the outset, there are numerous causes of this worry, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that nowadays, due to advancement of technology, most of all the human beings are using social media platforms to buy goods such as clothes and gadgets and get attracted towards fancy and costly items. As a consequence, they spend higher proportion of their income for buying unnecessary things. The new possible cause would be greed to live better life styles and to have more dominance in community. However, one in five humans have earned to feed their family, more numbers or fellows are wasting their money in non-affordable resources. To cite an example, my maternal uncle earn 30 thousand every month and spend almost all their earnings on unwanted items like cloths and fueling the car, as a result he end up being debtor.
However, few measures can really overcome this problem, as it is proven fact that every problem has a remedy. To limit this problem, the first and foremost valid solution would be cap the use of social media websites especially among youngsters. Not only this, but government should publish strict law to prohibit the usage of social sites among children less than eighteen. The next possible solution lies in the fact that each and every individual should develop the habit of checking their financial statement before obtaining a product. For an instance, Archi, my nephew, checks their bank funds to opt for an item.
To put it in a nutshell, it is evident that there are diverse causes of this difficulty and a plethora of solutions. Society must ensure steps are taken to prevent this problem deteriorating further.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83769633508 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47706510596 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575916230366 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 382.0 20.2975951904 1882% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1848.0 106.682146367 1732% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 382.0 20.7667163134 1839% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 57.0 7.06120827912 807% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310477689716 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.310477689716 0.084324248473 368% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184693650176 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853608492121 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 192.4 13.0946893788 1469% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -307.79 50.2224549098 -613% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 151.1 11.3001002004 1337% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 26.43 8.58950901804 308% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 154.8 10.1190380762 1530% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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