The advantages of robots doing the basic serving functions in the entertainment, leisure, and retail sectors of the economy outweigh the disadvantages.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Replacing the human labor force with artificial intelligence to undertake elementary responsibilities in industries such as show business, recreation and sales are believed to have lots more benefits than drawbacks. In this essay, I will argue that the trend is obviously positive especially when technology, in any shape or form, aims to improve our lives by offering us time to enjoy life.
If we think about it, the three industries function together in many aspects of our daily lives whether we talk about shopping malls or commerce online. Today, retail does not limit itself only to the act of selling goods but also is including a great deal of entertainment and leisure activities. From this perspective, I believe that artificial machines have the necessary means to help us boost the quality of our lives, whenever we want to take a break from work and daily routines.
Robots and technology can upgrade our shopping experiences by offering us assistance. For example, robots would make perfect guides in shopping malls and could help people with disabilities not only to find their way around but also with the carrying of groceries. Moreover, robots could help us identify the best offers and make suggestions for certain types of movies or events that could be interesting to us or to our children. They could serve us drinks or food while we are relaxing on a trace and enjoy a beautiful concert being virtually broadcast using holograms. The benefits are enormous in comparison with the downsides.
This way, artists could be in more places at the same time and still get paid accordingly. Unfortunately, some jobs will be lost of course but new ones will be created as robots can only perform certain tasks and do not have the ability to improvise if necessary. Moreover, robots do not have social interaction skills which are evidently of utmost importance in the mentioned fields of activity. As a result, humans will still be needed but they will only work less and have more free time on their hands.
In conclusion, I completely agree with the statement and I truly believe that this trend will continue to have a positive impact on our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86849315068 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65391081889 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553424657534 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 365.0 20.2975951904 1798% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1777.0 106.682146367 1666% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 365.0 20.7667163134 1758% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 115.0 7.06120827912 1629% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111854330145 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111854330145 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625936464346 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217654755954 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 184.0 13.0946893788 1405% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -299.0 50.2224549098 -595% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 145.6 11.3001002004 1288% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.45 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.5 8.58950901804 297% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 148.0 10.1190380762 1463% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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