Dear Marie,
I hope you are doing splendidly well. I am writing about your upcoming camping holiday.
Believe me, I am delighted that you have chosen a camping holiday. I do think as you are fond of nature and natural views with divergent coverage of flora and fauna this would be a breathtaking holiday for you. Since you got familiar with this kind of trip through social media`s ads I will not go for further explanation. Just bear in your mind which kind of places you are going to select for camping. To dig more, camping sites vary from drylands to tropical lands such as jungle or forest. To me, each of them has its own merits and downsides. Just be certain you are going to visit exquisite places and experience unforgettable moments. This kind of trip fits your personality according to the fact that you are an adventurous person always open to novel experiences.
Put aside all outstanding features you are going to observe closely, I desire to warn you against some general drawbacks of this type of short journey you may confront through your campsite. First and foremost, you are normally going to sleep in a big tent with a group of people around you and this is not considered a safe activity because of the possibility of the presence of wild animals particularly if you select jungle or forest campsites sometimes these animals can harm you if you do not have the expertise to deal with them. Following what I have said, I am also sure that your camp mentor can manage all these unpredictable events. Secondly and importantly, do not expect adequate or second to none facilities. To be exact, you may need to take a shower with the minimum amenity as you could imagine. Therefore, you cannot be that much neat and tidy to the extent that you wish. The last point I want you to be aware of is the limited hours of sleeping you are going to face. on a campsite trip, you do not have the chance of getting enough sleep and it may affect your health condition or it can be put you in a boring phase so please be prepared for above mentioned potential shortcomings.
My friend Marie, if you remember our recent letters, I have informed you that I am completing my thesis to gain my PhD degree thus I am snowed under with various tasks to perform these days actually, I put my nose to the grindstone. Unfortunately, because of the given reason, I am in bad luck that I can not enjoy your accompany for the upcoming holiday.
Wish you a super marvelous holiday
Take extra care,
Hiva
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, kind of, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 73.0 32.9175257732 222% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 26.3917525773 201% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 937.175257732 209% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 437.0 206.0 212% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48512585812 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 3.78020617076 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49019883329 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 127.690721649 182% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530892448513 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 637.2 290.88556701 219% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 437.0 16.3608247423 2671% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1960.0 76.5299724578 2561% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 437.0 16.8248392259 2597% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 107.0 4.34317383033 2464% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297877277822 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.297877277822 0.0766984524023 388% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184857357031 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569694485431 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 218.2 8.37731958763 2605% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -363.62 70.7449484536 -514% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 172.5 7.45979381443 2312% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.24 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 28.42 7.59969072165 374% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 86.0 41.2886597938 208% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 8.62886597938 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 176.8 8.54432989691 2069% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 52.0 8.15463917526 638% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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