People devided into two opinions. The first believe that it is normally to have a low wages or dissatisfactory job while others think that it is need to correct it. This essay will discuss both of views.
To begin with, every individual try to adapt in any situation in life in order to succeed. Some tolerate any condition they found themselves into and this is not because they like it but due to that there is no other alternative.
People sometimes may become pessimistic about their situations and accept their fate thinking there is no other option. For instance, an illiterate person may think that he may not be able get a job with good income and may settle for menial jobs. Sometimes people lose hope while suffering from severe health related issues.
In summary, people should try to remain optimistic in any situation and try to change their fate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, while, for instance, in summary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 1615.20841683 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 150.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 4.20363070211 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49831943514 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673333333333 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6909010822 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188939946456 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732875696296 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376028425171 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11135655182 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209846061884 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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