The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The two graphs illustrates comparative data of how many international students and domestic students enrol in Australian universities over a decade.
As can be seen in the first graph, the number of commencing overseas students increased moderately, from around 10000 students in 2001 to 40000 students in 2009 and remained unchanged in 2010. In comparison, the figure of the second graph depicts that from approximately 160000 students in the beginning, the number of local students enrolling in universities rose to about 240000, fell steadily before increasing to just below the previous position in 2002.
According to the first graph again, the total international students gaining tertiary education in Australia was observed to upsurge significantly from only 20000 students in 2001 to just above 80000 students after 10 years. Similarly, the total number of domestic students also grew progressively from 400000 students initially to 600000 students in 2007 and then plateaued for the next 4 years.
Overall, local students were seen to be roughly 10 times more than overseas students in terms of enrolling in Australian universities. However, there was a considerable growth in the number of commencing international students after a decade while the number of commencing domestic students remained quite stable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, similarly, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58910891089 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03308634613 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549504950495 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.6511263537 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.285714286 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287888199702 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164571880254 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530709795442 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206045006814 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369056412413 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.2329268293 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 11.4140731707 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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