In modernization there are number of movies release everyday and it good source of entertainment ,but nowadays some films separate the religions of human community due to this I think that the disadvantages more than advantages
First of all , movies is the good source of income producers spend lot of money on it and the individual also excited to watch movies in cinema. In some cases the producers spend money in particular relation movie For example , 1984 movie which effect the culture because in those film the government force to Sikh to change their cast due this government ban those movie .
Furthermore, the youngsters follow the actors who acting in specific movie when they wear any formal cloths then teenager request to parents to purchase to formal clothed after that they wear those clothes as a fashion . Moreover,
In now days the younger wear formal cloths and post those photos in different app and websites such as , Facebook , Instagram and whatsapp etc . In this way the teenagers forget their cultures and traditions .
To conclude, their are number of disadvantages of movie like in this way youngsters forget moral values and tradition as well as cultures.
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- Nowadays cultures of different countries are becoming more similar than they used to be What are the reason Is it a positive or a negative development Give your own opinion and examples 55
- The exposure of international media such as films TV and magazines has impacts on local culture What do you think of the impacts have been Do you agree that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 51
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, i think, in particular, such as, as well as, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09183673469 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69908922796 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.8413040164 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.333333333 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 24.3333333333 7.06120827912 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0538837460285 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286933782929 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0170290032131 0.0667982634062 25% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0343623258304 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283221615538 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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