Leadership is acquired character. However, it is impossible for everyone to gain it because it is framed within specified characters. A leader needs uniqueness that makes him stand out in his group. There are several factors responsible for making a good leaders which I will be portraying below.
To begin with, a good leader needs to have guts to stand out at any difficult circumstances. He needs to be fierce and vehemant. He needs to be plucky and cautious. This pluckyness should not be confined only in his pretentiousness but also in his actions. This can be corroborated by real life example. Everybody knows about Hitler. Although he is pictured as tyrant, he was a good leader at least for Germans. Hitler was stand out leader because he had guts to speak against the heart breaking World War I treaties which were clearly unfavouring his nation. Ancient Germany had myriad leaders and generals but why is it only Hitler who is well known? It is because of his braveness and courage that made him better and world famous. Therefore, braveness is one of the main character of a leader.
Aditionally, a leader should have habit of listening and respecting everyone. Listening and respecting everyone creates a shoft spot in follower's heart. This character develop trust and respect in follower's mind. A leader without the habit of listening would be no different from a tyrant. There are lively exemples of this in present world. Martin Luther King, pioneer of then 'Black Lives Matters' movement, is considered as best leader in American middle age. He was even able to attract and involve whites into his movement eventhough he was fighting against whites. Martin had charming personality and had habits of listening to people. This charming personality established trust among him and his followers. This resulted in formulation of 'Emancipation Proclamation'. If Martin was not charming and didn't have any trust of his followers, America would not be the same as of now.
To conclude, a good leaders needs to have various character that makes him superior in his group. These uniqueness is brought about by fierceness and habits of listening others. These characters bring trust in followers, without whom a leader would not be what he is.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'leader'?
Suggestion: leader
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Message: Did you mean 'this uniqueness' or 'These uniquenesses'?
Suggestion: This uniqueness; These uniquenesses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, at least, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00533333333 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79616753591 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514666666667 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0524219158 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.724137931 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9310344828 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55172413793 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201351491914 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536281047122 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538446501976 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135874523927 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397403696042 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.89 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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