In this modern era, nothing is comparable to friendship. The stronger friendship bound, the more confidence a person would have. As I see among people, they usually try different tasks to improve their friendship’s quality. Some try to allocate much time to enjoy besides their friends while others try to talk about their problems and solve them in group. But when it comes to me, I believe nothing is better than being supportive for each other in every happening situation. In this essay, I will elaborate on the reason why I think so.
First of all, compared to last decades, people do not care about other people. In this these hectic days, every person will have good and bad days. when a bad day arrives, people usually feel alone and lost. They need someone to stand besides them and help them pass the gloomy days. In this condition, no one is better than friends. When everything is against you, a friend can help you thrive. Some years ago, one of my friends was divorced from her wife although he was in love with her. So, he had a nightmare every night and could not live alone. He was paralized and even he thought about doing suicide. At this time, I decided to live with him for month a to help him pass this predicamantpredicament. Now, he is like my brother, even closer than my brother. I think that one month was the reason of our strong friendship bond.
Moreover, during enjoyable days it is easy stand by everyone. True friends help each other in bad days. It is the time we can know our real friends. I firmly believe we can segragate our genuine friends from the ones who are just around us to spend time in these harsh conditions. A friend involving himself to our problem and supporting us untill we thrive those days are most valuable people. I firmly believe after these days, people appreciate their friendship and strenghten their friendship bond. I can tell you from my own experience that all of my old friends are the ones that we support each other in every single day of our lives, whether the a good day or a bad one.
In conclusion, I personally believe friends are the most important people in our life and we should try to improve our friendship as much as we can. In my opinion, one of the best ways to do this is to support each other in all conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...ery person will have good and bad days. when a bad day arrives, people usually feel ...
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Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
... every single day of our lives, whether the a good day or a bad one. In conclusion, ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1885.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50956937799 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52568704116 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497607655502 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6198794807 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8148148148 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4814814815 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59259259259 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282539207717 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671207746216 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528859426063 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167668225158 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387858412696 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.61 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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