Dear Arman,
My name is Ankit Parekh. I recently attended your concert held in Ahmedabad. I wanted to let you know that it was really amazing listening to your songs at a live concert. To commence with, the atmosphere at your concert was impeccable. Everyone in the audience got excited when you came on the stage to sing/perform. I was thrilled to hear you live. I have some basic knowledge of music and I can tell that you did not miss a single note in your performance, even though you were dancing and singing at the same time. I make it a point to attend all of your concerts organized in Gujarat. Last year I even went to Mumbai to watch your live performance during an award ceremony.
Additionally, I want to tell you that I am a guitar player. I play here in the local band. Everyone feels that I should try and play in a bigger band or for music composers. If you can give me tips on how to approach the composers or give me a chance to play in a concert, it would be a big opportunity for me.
I hope, you would give me tips so that I can learn well and I am looking forward to your next live in concert.
Yours truly,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: try to
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...would be a big opportunity for me. I hope, you would give me tips so that I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23287671233 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50716951154 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579908675799 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1023135936 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2142857143 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6428571429 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383847439019 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119748709576 0.0766984524023 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688038034823 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233790161837 0.12726935374 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546384711018 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.