In the era of globalisation, the world is changing very fast and also the rules and norms of society. It is true that children has more freedom as compare to the past. In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative development in the subsequent paragraphs.
There are various reasons why I believe that it is a positive trend. To begin with, children are more influenced by the usage of technology such as satellite TV, mobile phones and laptop etcetera. Now youngsters become well informed and escalate their knowledge by using these sources. In addition, juveniles collect the information which do not know their parents and grandparents.
Moreover, with the help of this freedom, they are in the touch of social sites. In this way, they can share their own ideas with others. Furthermore, in today's world, children have an opportunity to study in another countries. They adapt the global culture and their way of thinking is also changed. For example, dowry system and discrimination among boys and girls is also reduced from our society.
On the other hand, there are certain reasons why others considered it a negative. Firstly, if children have more freedom than they will not respect their parents. Sometimes they took a wrong decision and they do not know which things good or bad for them. Secondly, by using social sites, the younsters can join the bad groups. Consequently, they can use the drugs and doing the crime as well.
To sum up, it can be reiterated that children should enjoy the freedom by small and large, a good thing but it is the responsiblity of parents they should guide them. So that we can remove the negative trend.
- Nowadays in many places it is found that children are given more freedom than they require What do you think is it a positive or negative development 61
- Nowadays in many places it is found that children are given more freedom than they require What do you think is it a positive or negative development 61
- Some people think that there are benefits in going to private secondary schools Others feel that private schools can have negative effects on the society Discuss both the view and give your opinion 84
- Crime is a big problem in the world many believe that nothing can be done to prevent it To what extent do you agree or disagree Give your own opinion 84
- Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lity of parents they should guide them. So that we can remove the negative trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, such as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84507042254 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62737409291 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5636746115 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.4210526316 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9473684211 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78947368421 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228620705574 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669305994763 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598631142826 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121340024826 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384726480195 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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