Pollution, that which is increased rapidly is the most treateing issue the world faces today. I think it is a many of things which do not recycling by people. Which can be big impairment on the environment. I believe government should take precious steps to the people and it can be encourage of the people for recycling.
Initially, recycling is the big problem for all most countries. Some person do not aware about the waste rabbish and waste things like paper, glass, bottle, etc are direct prejudice to the environment and people health. In addition, which is make a environment very harmful and it is trouble to take breathe. Besides, many people do not takes extra effort and today life is very workaholic, however they have no extra time for take some effective steps. The strong example, vatva is a capital part of the ahmedabad, there is a lot of big industry and which is damage of the surrounding area.
On the other hand, government should make a strict rules to the person. When people go to market at that time they should avoid some plastic bags and use the clothes bags. Furthermore, we should recycle some things like plastic bottle, glass, paper, etc and reuse useful materials. Households items can use serval rubbish bins to separate waste which can be diminish the pollution and recycling save energy and raw materials. The final statement, some companies should not make over package but they only make package very limited.
In conclude, it can be finally said that the issue of the government should make the stringent rules to the big companies and industry.
- Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and use of the world s fuel resources to what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The graph below show the spending on research into renewable sources of energy in four countries between 1975 and 2000 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The graph below shows the percentage of people who travelled by bus in the UK from 2009 to 2011 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- People can eat a wide variety of food from other regions As a result they are eating a lot of foreign food instead of locally produced food Do you think the advantages of eating foreign foods are more than their harms 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, i think, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86029411765 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53418453609 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518382352941 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7667853508 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176671854153 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643820817751 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645000843297 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112959292696 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511813033135 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.