It's a view of most people that great leaders are inborn while others opine that leadership skills can be achieved by learning these. Both points are valid and play an important role to become a successful leader. In the next paragraphs, I will discuss both the views,
First of all, some individuals are hereditary intelligent and supervision skills are present in their genes. These persons have a certain level of intelligent quotient which is different from others, due to which they acquire some special skills and behave like a boss in their schools, games and other activities. So, it's God-gifted quality present in few people. For example, Abraham Lincoln was brilliant since his childhood and gained whole knowledge through self-study. He became the best president of the USA during the civil war and served the nation.
Although, leaders are born but still, there is a way to develop these capabilites by education. Most of the CEOs, managing deirectors and other chiefs learn effective techniques of spearheading teams, enterpreneurship while studying in the most famous and best universities. So, any person can attain these potentialities by joining good management courses.
To sum up, inbuilt leadership plays very important role to be a leader whereas these skills could be acquired by pursuing management and advisory courses in renowned academies. Thus, it's possible to become a leader even if you don't have inbuilt attributes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
Its a view of most people that great leader...
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Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...possible to become a leader even if you dont have inbuilt attributes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, thus, whereas, while, for example, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2683982684 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84857695347 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0973405363 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.416666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234577591616 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071750403179 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082372937104 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137433688923 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099241198329 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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