Nowadays, sports is playing important role in the society. In these days organizing international sports events is beneficial for home countries, whereas, some people opine that it is not beneficial. In this essay I will discuss both the views and provide my opinion in next parts.
There are various compelling reasons to organizing events in country. First and for most reason is, it boost economy of their countries. For instance, developed country like Japan some time organize world level sports games like olympic in Japan and it automatic boosts economy of it. Second reason is, it developed skills of talents and sports people gaining their knowledge and rewards according to their valued talent.
People who think that it has not good idea to conducting it in countries, like people wast their time. Secondly, they did not give more attention towards their study and work. For example, there are many sports people who left their study due to interest in sports and earning less. Thirdly, police force and other employees who are serving to their countries, they also have duty to make sure every sports man are safe in their country and sevring them till sports events has completed.
In conclusion, I believe that arranging soprts events have many benefits then its demerits. It is beneficial and increase value and status of the country. Sports people safety is important but serving country is also important. Country government try to encourage people to participate and mejor safety towards nation is also prominent.
Nowadays, sports is playing important role in the society. In these days organizing international sports events is beneficial for home countries, whereas, some people opine that it is not beneficial. In this essay I will discuss both the views and provide my opinion in next parts.
There are various compelling reasons to organizing events in country. First and for most reason is, it boost economy of their countries. For instance, developed country like Japan some time organize world level sports games like Olympic in Japan and it automatic boosts economy of it. Second reason is, it developed skills of talents and sports people gaining their knowledge and rewards according to their valued talent.
People who think that it has not good idea to conducting it in countries, like people waste their time. Secondly, they did not give more attention towards their study and work. For example, there are many sports people who left their study due to interest in sports and earning less. Thirdly, police force and other employees who are serving to their countries, they also have duty to make sure every sports man are safe in their country and serving them till sports events has completed.
In conclusion, I believe that arranging sports events have many benefits then its demerits. It is beneficial and increase value and status of the country. Sports people safety is important but serving country is also important. Country government try to encourage people to participate and major safety towards nation is also prominent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'boosts'?
Suggestion: boosts
...untry. First and for most reason is, it boost economy of their countries. For instanc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 5.60731707317 499% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 965.302439024 134% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.168 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48225703746 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4546152771 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1333333333 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397414960383 0.215688989381 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134071294841 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118357579625 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284610552804 0.15604864568 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.233716869169 0.0819641961636 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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