A growing population is a big problem in many countries. Should the government provide new houses in cities or in countryside.
The population growth rate in certain countries is relatively high, its growing with exponential rate which leads to huge problems for many countries. The question is should its government responsibility to develop new residential area in cities or outside in countryside. Many overly populated cities facing difficulties regarding prices of property and shortage of other facilities. In this essay we are going to explain some of major problems faced by crowded cities and some measures should took authority to carefully planning cities.
Although problem of population high number is concerning every country but this id severe in certain cities particular in developing nations. This is because of better facilities and opportunities of life for instance education and employment, therefore people try to move in big cities where they can find these easily. So, as a result prices of housing also increase because of high demand, which failed to cope such large number as these are planned for specific numbers of individuals.
In such situation its government officials responsibility to carefully monitor city population and build new city in nearby location possibly in countryside with all city facilities. If government construct new housing building to accommodate the need of resident than other basic infrastructure remained the same, which would bring more complications. However, building new city diverge population movement in two region and its advantageous to manage it. Another thing is if newly build city develop according to scientific and innovative stranded than problem like pollution and traffic congestion will definitely minimized by planting trees around roads and making wider roads and linkers.
In conclusion, population explosion is growing concerns for some cities because its consequences are devastating. In these countries authority have duty to handle it effectively by either forming new houses in existing cities or in countryside is main concern. Government should response to this situation by carefully planned structure of already present city and develop new city in countryside with its all better life facilities because without providing all development like big cities we could not stop people from other less developed areas from moving into cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'minimize'
Suggestion: minimize
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Suggestion: countries'; country's
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... countryside is main concern. Government should response to this situation by car...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, another thing, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59885386819 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95667019987 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56446991404 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.296819984 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.571428571 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421104461336 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139406901077 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614446475844 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25177525306 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782020677563 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.